Things done well:1. I like how your diagram is very specific and easy to follow. 2. I'm impressed by the dedication put in, into making the bell siphon work properly for your system.
Things that need improvement:
1. If you were to include an explanation of why your water test results changed, it would help the reader to understand why your tank is now at a "perfect condition" for your fish. 2. Maybe you guys should get a larger growth light since you have so much hydrotin From the picture, it doesn't look like your growth light will span the area of your hydrotin.
Questions that I have:1. When comparing the amount of water in your tank to…
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amakaobasi360
Dec 21, 2018
Things done well
1. Methodology is detailed
2. Detailed diagram
Things to improve on
1. You could create a tab to easily locate the posts and sub-topics
2. Give more insights tin what you're trying to explain.
Questions
1. How will the nutrients impact the growth of these crops?
Things done well: 1. I like how your diagram is very specific and easy to follow. 2. I'm impressed by the dedication put in, into making the bell siphon work properly for your system.
Things that need improvement:
1. If you were to include an explanation of why your water test results changed, it would help the reader to understand why your tank is now at a "perfect condition" for your fish. 2. Maybe you guys should get a larger growth light since you have so much hydrotin From the picture, it doesn't look like your growth light will span the area of your hydrotin.
Questions that I have: 1. When comparing the amount of water in your tank to…
Things done well
1. Methodology is detailed
2. Detailed diagram
Things to improve on
1. You could create a tab to easily locate the posts and sub-topics
2. Give more insights tin what you're trying to explain.
Questions
1. How will the nutrients impact the growth of these crops?
2. How will energy flow through your tank?